tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-135061730928837977.post3869312588840562370..comments2009-10-08T03:17:35.174-07:00Comments on The Government at Wakefield School: John locke and his Second Treatise, of civil governmentJessiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16892532569754996081noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-135061730928837977.post-23674141314752491542009-10-08T03:17:35.174-07:002009-10-08T03:17:35.174-07:00Jessie, you use quotations very well. I like the w...Jessie, you use quotations very well. I like the way you put out an idea in the author's words and them explain it for the audience. You have a very coversational style. Be careful not to get too conversational. This is formal writing.Your audience is bigger than me. Also careful with the facts. America as you use it in the first line did not exist when Locke wrote the @nd Treatise 9/10MrChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05825255080995135384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-135061730928837977.post-89864925672247462222009-09-17T11:26:06.042-07:002009-09-17T11:26:06.042-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.columbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02960921371555397637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-135061730928837977.post-88394006969116473482009-09-17T11:25:30.221-07:002009-09-17T11:25:30.221-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Zach Zavalanskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09267182856566089572noreply@blogger.com